8/16/2023 0 Comments Scenes from enemies with benefits![]() In theory, it’s okay, but in practice, it’s weird how Jamie is constantly the ‘female lead’ despite the fact MC is also the female lead in the sitcom, and she’s also part of the varsity team. ![]() The gender branching/pronouns is okay, but the female LI branch is a bit weird in that it’s almost exactly the same as the male LI’s. It didn’t make sense considering the two’s ‘reunion’ scene in the beginning, but whatever… At least they’re not bad overall to MC, just a crappy person in general LI (James or Jamie) in this story is often referred to as MC’s ‘high school rival’, but it’s more really ‘jock bully who just so happens to only have a sweet spot for MC back in HS, but had to humiliate her because of shitty friend’. Her character just gets grating at times, especially with her obsession and sustenance on cereal. Her ex broke up with her when they took up an opportunity in NY while she wanted to remain loyal to her big break in a cheesy sitcom. MC is basically two to three things: acting and cereal (and her tense relationship with the LI). That being said, this story is around annoying average so far. I kinda feel sorry for myself for not being necessarily as enthusiastic as before, creating some of these featured story discussion threads, especially because how some others are managed so far. Or, “I haven’t really bothered talking much about this story until someone asked me to in IG, so I’m now doing this 6 chapters in” yay
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